Poem

[rukia]

Can you hear me?
Or is your mind still foggy
Are you still blind?
To the truth I have shown

How many times must I speak these words
Before I break through to you
How many times must I draw
Your emotional blood

Ie cut you with my words
To make you open your eyes
Used the pain to make you hear

Hear me now?
Coward
Fool
Can you see it?
The image of you fleeing in fear

If you hold it in your view
Then stop, close your eyes
Block out all sound, all doubt
Look deep with in
See what you hate at your core

Give your hate a form
Now struggle against

This is the hardest path
The path only a man can walk
So
Are you a man?
Or just a child acting out a role?

The greatest challenge in this world
Is your own self
Do you have the strength?
To concur yourself

Can you fight against your own flaws?
I don care what your answer is
There is no other way for change
But to change what you are


So do you want to change?
Do you want to better your life?
Or are you content with this cycle?
Being the victim is fun for you isn it
Is the attention you receive really so satisfying?

I sick of your twisted games
I want to make you taste the dirt.
Your becoming everything I hate.
Yet my compassion is to great

So take this last life line
Open your eyes,
See clearly the world around you
The pain and joy
Hate and love
See not only what you have seen before
But watch the subtle motions of those around you
See how there every move reflects there thoughts

Hear the true meaning in there words,
See the truth in her eyes as she diverts her gaze.
Take all these truths
Bring them with in yourself
Don let go

So?Do you hear me yet?

[helloeveryone]

i like this one too its so good

[MalisPong]

Nice poem but I think a bit too long ...